Listening to this is an awesome punch to the gut, every time. You handled the windows of text really well too! Your Ray Vecchio is all kinds of awesome - kind of brash and full of energy - and man, Fraser is so mellow in comparison. Well, the few times he can actually manage mellow during this story! Also, the music is a really interesting choice that I don't think I'd have ever picked out, but it really really works in a way I'm having trouble qualifying. Thanks for sharing it :)