Thank you! That's great feedback. The text itself is...well, let's say not that well-written or well-organized. One of my challenges in attempting this particular class of book is to find ways to clarify things (like whole swaths of italics, or extra white space without an actual new heading) that are easier to parse visually, but without adding actual words.
I've used bits of music as "dividing lines" in podfic, and I've heard it done with varying degrees of success in pro fiction and, occasionally, in non-fiction. This book might be a good case for it.
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I've used bits of music as "dividing lines" in podfic, and I've heard it done with varying degrees of success in pro fiction and, occasionally, in non-fiction. This book might be a good case for it.
Thanks so much! And I LOVE your icon! That's fab.