darkemeralds: Photo of fingers on a computer keyboard. (Writing)
Narrative urgency: when your first sentence makes your reader want the second sentence, and your second sentence makes them want the third, and so on to the end.

It's brilliant, despite having been buried in THE MOST ANNOYING WRITING CLASS IN THE WORLD OMG, taught by an autodidact with pretensions of expertise because he writes a fairly prominent blog and has a novel coming out soon. And people like me sign up and pay good money to take his class. So, define "credentials", right? Anyway, someone who irritates me as much as this guy does probably has a lot to teach me.

BUT NOT ABOUT GRAMMAR GODDAMMIT. )
darkemeralds: A round magical sigil of mysterious meaning, in bright colors with black outlines. A pen nib is suggested by the intersection of the cryptic forms. (Default)
I've spent the entire day slogging through a series of events and motivations in the novel. Character A does this, and Character B reacts, causing A to step up his actions, which in turn cause B to freak out, etc. I'd written the scenes at widely disparate moments, and not in linear order, and I was pretty sure they weren't flowing logically.

I'm pleased to report that after ten hours of wrestling, I've got them lined up, and the causal links smoothed out, and everyone's character intact. (I did this by identifying the ten key scenes, then making each of the main characters tell me what happened from his perspective, in the first person. They took their sweet time.)

So I'm gonna have a bowl of ice cream. Haagen-Dazs coffee, with hot gianduja sauce. Then I'm going to write some more. Because it's torture, but it's a good torture, you know?

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